style(index): reword intro

Author: slack

src/index.md

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 Deis (pronounced DAY-iss) Workflow is an open source Platform as a Service (PaaS) that adds a developer-friendly layer
 to any Kubernetes cluster, making it easy to deploy and manage applications.
 
-Deis Workflow includes capabilities for building and deploying from source via `git push`, configuring your applications,
-creating and rolling back releases, managing application domain names and SSL certificates, providing edge routing,
-aggregating application logs, and controlling access to application resources. All of this is exposed through a simple
-REST API and command line interface.
+Deis Workflow includes capabilities for building and deploying from source via `git push`, simple application
+configuration, creating and rolling back releases, managing domain names and SSL certificates, providing seamless edge
+routing, aggregating logs, and sharing applications with teams. All of this is exposed through a simple REST API and
+command line interface.
 
 ## Getting Started